Soooo I wrote this. I'm a Nub?

Just one suggestion Johnny, the 2nd stanza,because you have already used the word memories in the first line there is no need to use past in the 2nd line so I suggest "When I was younger and free from crime".This also shortens the line. Do not worry about your grammar,leave that up to the reader. This is a gentle poem, a pastoral poem which I like very much. These are remembered pleasures from behind bars so your words suggest.